Cave Canum
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by Darklady
Arf! Gerrr yap! Yap! Yip yip yip! Yap yap!
Words: 1878, Chapters: 1/1, Language: English
- Fandoms: Rivers of London - Ben Aaronovitch
- Rating: General Audiences
- Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
- Categories: Gen
- Characters: Toby (Rivers of London), Molly (Rivers of London)
Recent DNFs (Did Not Finish): Horror, Romantasy, Mount St. Helens
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Recent DNFs (Did Not Finish)
Wake Up and Open Your Eyes, by Clay McLeod Chapman

A horror novel about - I think - how a Q-Anon analogue turns people into literal zombies. I couldn't get into this book. I don't think it was bad, it just wasn't my thing. I didn't vibe with the prose style at all.
The Baby Dragon Cafe, by A. T. Qureshi

A woman opens a cafe that's also a baby dragon rescue. I adored the idea of this book, not to mention the extremely charming cover, but the execution left a lot to be desired. It was just plain dull. I dragged myself through two chapters, both of which felt eternal, then gave up. Too bad! I really wanted to like it, because the idea is delightful.
In the Path of Destruction: Eyewitness Chronicles of Mount St. Helens, by Richard Waitt

This ought to have been exactly my jam, except for the author's absolutely bizarre prose style, which is a combination of Pittman shorthand and Chuck Tingle's Twitter minus the sense of humor, with an allergy to articles and very strange syntax. I literally had no idea what some of his sentences meant. This weirdness extends to direct quotes from multiple people, making me suspect how direct they are. And yes, this was traditionally published.
Here are some quotes, none of which make more sense in context:
It contrasts the chance jungle violence with lava flows off Kilauea - so Hollywood but predictable.
"The state's closure seems yours. Have I missed something?"
[And here's a bunch of Tinglers.]
Heart attack took Eddie in 1975.
These years since wife Eddie died Truman's fire has cooled.
Since wife Eddie died, Rob is the closest he has to a friend.
Since wife Eddie died, Truman has been a bleak recluse, the winters especially lonely.
Wake Up and Open Your Eyes, by Clay McLeod Chapman

A horror novel about - I think - how a Q-Anon analogue turns people into literal zombies. I couldn't get into this book. I don't think it was bad, it just wasn't my thing. I didn't vibe with the prose style at all.
The Baby Dragon Cafe, by A. T. Qureshi

A woman opens a cafe that's also a baby dragon rescue. I adored the idea of this book, not to mention the extremely charming cover, but the execution left a lot to be desired. It was just plain dull. I dragged myself through two chapters, both of which felt eternal, then gave up. Too bad! I really wanted to like it, because the idea is delightful.
In the Path of Destruction: Eyewitness Chronicles of Mount St. Helens, by Richard Waitt

This ought to have been exactly my jam, except for the author's absolutely bizarre prose style, which is a combination of Pittman shorthand and Chuck Tingle's Twitter minus the sense of humor, with an allergy to articles and very strange syntax. I literally had no idea what some of his sentences meant. This weirdness extends to direct quotes from multiple people, making me suspect how direct they are. And yes, this was traditionally published.
Here are some quotes, none of which make more sense in context:
It contrasts the chance jungle violence with lava flows off Kilauea - so Hollywood but predictable.
"The state's closure seems yours. Have I missed something?"
[And here's a bunch of Tinglers.]
Heart attack took Eddie in 1975.
These years since wife Eddie died Truman's fire has cooled.
Since wife Eddie died, Rob is the closest he has to a friend.
Since wife Eddie died, Truman has been a bleak recluse, the winters especially lonely.
Death and Other Details
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Bloody Game's season 2 has been a slog of a watch so I ended up starting Death and Other Details, which was on my list for a while but I forgot about it, and I'm missing Only Murders in the Building so it felt like the right time to check it out? Plus I ended up reading Agatha Christie's Hallowe'en Party at the same time, so I suppose I'm just in the mood.
I was actually just thinking that I love Only Murders for the characters and the setting, because the whodunits aren't that clever (season 3 being an exception for me, YMMV), and that in general, writing whodunits that can be pieced together satisfyingly is way harder than it looks! So starting Death and Other Details I'm already wincing that it opens with narration to "pay attention to details" because... we do. Murder mystery fans, I mean. Some cinematic/TV takes do the parsing out of details well (The Last of Sheila stands out to me) but it's hard to get us off-guard in a way that we're in on it instead of pulling the rug out.
Anyway Death and Other Details starts like traditional murder mystery but pulls away in the long form when the first two murders are solved by a confession, and there's a greater mystery underneath it that's also linked to a murder that happened before the show starts. Mandy Patinkin is the show's World's Greatest Detective, except the show actually belongs to his assistant/protege/client Imogene -- which I did think is a nice touch. The show does do a bunch of stuff well, including having interesting side characters that gain depth in the long form and some of whom could genuinely be the main characters of their own stories (Teddy and Leila in particular), the locked setting of a cruise ship is nice, and I did like the show's actual throughline which is that memory is flawed and can be difficult to rely on. Though on the flipside, digging through memory is what is used to "solve" the mystery, instead of detectiving (though Agatha Christie makes it look so EASY to combine the both).
( The show didn't stick the landing, though. Spoilers for everything. )
I was actually just thinking that I love Only Murders for the characters and the setting, because the whodunits aren't that clever (season 3 being an exception for me, YMMV), and that in general, writing whodunits that can be pieced together satisfyingly is way harder than it looks! So starting Death and Other Details I'm already wincing that it opens with narration to "pay attention to details" because... we do. Murder mystery fans, I mean. Some cinematic/TV takes do the parsing out of details well (The Last of Sheila stands out to me) but it's hard to get us off-guard in a way that we're in on it instead of pulling the rug out.
Anyway Death and Other Details starts like traditional murder mystery but pulls away in the long form when the first two murders are solved by a confession, and there's a greater mystery underneath it that's also linked to a murder that happened before the show starts. Mandy Patinkin is the show's World's Greatest Detective, except the show actually belongs to his assistant/protege/client Imogene -- which I did think is a nice touch. The show does do a bunch of stuff well, including having interesting side characters that gain depth in the long form and some of whom could genuinely be the main characters of their own stories (Teddy and Leila in particular), the locked setting of a cruise ship is nice, and I did like the show's actual throughline which is that memory is flawed and can be difficult to rely on. Though on the flipside, digging through memory is what is used to "solve" the mystery, instead of detectiving (though Agatha Christie makes it look so EASY to combine the both).
( The show didn't stick the landing, though. Spoilers for everything. )
Curiosity [Renji/Byakuya; G]
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Title: Curiosity
Fandom/Pairing: Bleach - implied Renji/Byakuya
Summary: Renji has noticed something about his Captain, and now he's curious to find out more.
Rating: G
Content: Authority figure kink, unrequited crush
Disclaimer: The world and characters of Bleach are not mine, they all belong to Kubo Tite. I just play with them, using them as paper dolls.
Notes: 250+ words. Written for the prompt Comfort media. Just a little something I wrote to try to break through a spot of writer's block. Many thanks to
zabimitsuki for beta-reading this for me! :)
Read it here: DW | AO3
Fandom/Pairing: Bleach - implied Renji/Byakuya
Summary: Renji has noticed something about his Captain, and now he's curious to find out more.
Rating: G
Content: Authority figure kink, unrequited crush
Disclaimer: The world and characters of Bleach are not mine, they all belong to Kubo Tite. I just play with them, using them as paper dolls.
Notes: 250+ words. Written for the prompt Comfort media. Just a little something I wrote to try to break through a spot of writer's block. Many thanks to
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Read it here: DW | AO3
Days of Yearning [Sasaki/Miyano; PG]
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Title: Days of Yearning
Fandom/Pairing: Sasaki to Miyano - Sasaki/Miyano
Summary: Sasaki's new life at university is painful, but not really because of his studies...
Rating: PG
Content: Fluff, teenage boy romance, pining
Disclaimer: I did not create these characters, they belong to Harusono Shô. I'm just borrowing them to act out my fantasies, while not earning any money whatsoever from it.
Notes: 650+ words. Written for the prompts torture, catch, deliver and lovesick. Many thanks to
zabimitsuki for helping me with the beta. :)
Read it here: DW | AO3
Fandom/Pairing: Sasaki to Miyano - Sasaki/Miyano
Summary: Sasaki's new life at university is painful, but not really because of his studies...
Rating: PG
Content: Fluff, teenage boy romance, pining
Disclaimer: I did not create these characters, they belong to Harusono Shô. I'm just borrowing them to act out my fantasies, while not earning any money whatsoever from it.
Notes: 650+ words. Written for the prompts torture, catch, deliver and lovesick. Many thanks to
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Read it here: DW | AO3
Why and how to blow the dust off a WIP
Jul. 22nd, 2025 08:58 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
I'm listening to Meditations for Mortals: Four weeks to enhance your limitations and make time for what counts, written and narrated by Oliver Burkeman, which espouses imperfectionism, a philosophy of life where you acknowledge that you'll never manage to do everything, and you stop beating yourself up about that fact. (I'm only seven short chapters in, hence this massive oversimplification.) I was thinking about how this relates to my WIP folder.
I'm serially monofannish. When I move fandoms, my old WIPs generally acquire Permanently Discontinued status. Sometimes I post them to AO3 marked incomplete, and other times they lurk in a subfolder of my WIP folder, where I occasionally mourn their lost potential. But mostly they're easy to ignore.
Over the months and years in a new fandom, I naturally accumulate more WIPs. So how do I choose what to work on next? How do I blow the dust off and get the engine turning over?
( Below the cut: multiple lists! )
I'm serially monofannish. When I move fandoms, my old WIPs generally acquire Permanently Discontinued status. Sometimes I post them to AO3 marked incomplete, and other times they lurk in a subfolder of my WIP folder, where I occasionally mourn their lost potential. But mostly they're easy to ignore.
Over the months and years in a new fandom, I naturally accumulate more WIPs. So how do I choose what to work on next? How do I blow the dust off and get the engine turning over?
( Below the cut: multiple lists! )
The Knowledge Thief
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by Darklady
Abigail Kamara’s first year of college is going fine until her best friend collapses crying on her shoulder. Priya studied, she knows she did, so why can’t she remember a word?
More worrisome to Abigail is the strange vestigium covering her friend’s papers. She knows she’s only wizard at Oxford. Well, she’s the only one who should be at Oxford. (Not like there haven’t been a few issues with that in the past.) So what the $#!% is going on!
Words: 7274, Chapters: 1/1, Language: English
- Fandoms: Rivers of London - Ben Aaronovitch
- Rating: General Audiences
- Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
- Categories: Gen
- Characters: Abigail Kamara
Book Log: Journey to the Centre of the Earth
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Not the Jules Verne novel, but the pop science book by David Whitehouse that has the subtitle The Remarkable Voyage of Scientific Discovery into the Heart of Our World. It's about what's inside planet Earth: crust, mantel, core, and all the fun stuff that happened to or happens because of these elements, i.e. earthquakes and volcanoes, continental drift, magnetic shielding, and so on. I got this book at a warehouse sale yeaaaars ago.
Fun topic! But the writing is unfortunately awkward. I've read enough pop science books by this point, sometimes in topics that are so far reaching (that book about time and time keeping, for example) yet have a certain flow that works to bring the reader bobbing along gently in the eddies of a topic even as it sometimes swerves in unexpected directions. The book makes attempts to do that, and uses the Jules Verne book as a signpost of sorts as it brings the reader "into" the planet layer by layer, but turns to various asides without warning (sometimes from one paragraph to the next underneath it) that are not brought back into the main narrative in a cohesive way, and the asides are sometimes too long for the actual point they concern the main topic -- especially true for asides of various scientists Whitehouse wants to highlight in the historical discoveries of earthscience. Also, author does not explain a lot of terms he should be explaining! I already know what declination is, for example, but it was harder still to follow certain descriptions, especially when it came to the movement within the mantel and how using seismographs to map the inside works. The author knows his stuff, but needs a better editor.
Anyway, planet earth is weird and has a dynamo inside that is one of the key factors leading the life on this planet. Also its way bigger and deeper than people usually think it is, and in many aspects we know less about it than we do about outer space.
Fun topic! But the writing is unfortunately awkward. I've read enough pop science books by this point, sometimes in topics that are so far reaching (that book about time and time keeping, for example) yet have a certain flow that works to bring the reader bobbing along gently in the eddies of a topic even as it sometimes swerves in unexpected directions. The book makes attempts to do that, and uses the Jules Verne book as a signpost of sorts as it brings the reader "into" the planet layer by layer, but turns to various asides without warning (sometimes from one paragraph to the next underneath it) that are not brought back into the main narrative in a cohesive way, and the asides are sometimes too long for the actual point they concern the main topic -- especially true for asides of various scientists Whitehouse wants to highlight in the historical discoveries of earthscience. Also, author does not explain a lot of terms he should be explaining! I already know what declination is, for example, but it was harder still to follow certain descriptions, especially when it came to the movement within the mantel and how using seismographs to map the inside works. The author knows his stuff, but needs a better editor.
Anyway, planet earth is weird and has a dynamo inside that is one of the key factors leading the life on this planet. Also its way bigger and deeper than people usually think it is, and in many aspects we know less about it than we do about outer space.
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Summer of Horror and other fun things
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Obligatory reminder that I have a fic in the exchange as well. Deeply mysterious, hid my tracks amazingly as usual. And there is a lovely selection of other horror fic as well!
Earlier today, before all of that, I posted yet another Murderbot TV-verse fic, System // Handshake (2500 wds, gen, post-canon). Summary is spoilery for the finale; it's loosely springboarded off another fic I'd read earlier.
There's also this seriously adorable short interview with the whole Murderbot cast (link goes to Tumblr) in which they talk about playing the Bitter/Sweet game from the show on the set. HOW ARE THEY SO CUTE, I DIEEEEEE
And, longer and more serious, but I really enjoyed watching this David Dastmalchian interview; he talks about the show, as well as some of his other projects (Dune; comic book writing) and is so adorably excited about the show and invested in it.
Guardian Readalong: Vol. 3, Chapters 21 & 22
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Welcome aboard for this week's chapters of our Guardian readalong!
Here are last week's chapters. You can find all previous discussions on the schedule post (part 1, part 2, part 3, part 4, part 5), or via the !readalong tag.
This week's chapters:
- Chapter 21: The Yanluo Kings want to use Zhao Yunlan's heart's blood as the Guardian Lantern's wick, but the yao storm the Yanluo Courts under the leadership of Fourth Uncle, and likewise the daoists and assorted other immortals who were present at Kunlun Mountain. Ghost Face and various gui break free from the Wangchuan, and Shen Wei's trap is sprung. Zhao Yunlan half learns, half figures out Shen Wei's plan, and Zhu Hong clarifies Zhao Yunlan's feelings for Shen Wei. Ghost Face blows himself up.
- Chapter 22: Guo Changcheng and Chu Shuzhi fight various youchu (including the fake rogue cultivator) with the combined might of fear stick and zombie powers, then escape to the top of the mountain, but end up in trouble there again anyway. Meanwhile, Shen Wei, Zhao Yunlan and Lin Jing run into Daqing, escape from the Netherworld, and find SID and other people waiting for them. Shen Wei plans to re-seal the Four Pillars with the Hallows, and Zhao Yunlan tells Shennong's mortar to take his place and take care of his parents. Everyone comes together to help Shen Wei.
Excerpts:
( 1) Zhu Hong defends Zhao Yunlan against the Yanluo Kings' designs )
( 2) Shen Wei is caught out )
( 3) Zhu Hong and Shen Wei have a rapprochement )
( 4) Speech time for Ghost Face )
( 5) Chu Shuzhi weaponises Guo Changcheng's fear )
( 6) Shen Wei addresses the crowd )
( 7) Zhao Yunlan's request for Shennong's mortar )
Questions:
What do you think of Shen Wei's plans? Or of the way he acts towards Zhao Yunlan? Is it satisfying seeing all the different characters coming together again? Are you following everything that's going on? How annoyed are you that we don't learn how Lin Jing made it to the Yanluo Courts in one piece? Any thoughts about Ghost Face exploding himself, and what the drama made out of that? Which of the things that has a direct parallel in the drama is your favourite bit of adaptation?
(As usual, these are just conversation starters - feel free to answer all, some, or none, and to say as much or as little as you like!)
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